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MeKilla the Hun
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« on: May 15, 2011, 06:50:44 PM »

i'm sure we have some good writers here... so post your work!  poetry, stories, whatever you have.. or, share work that you like.  or recommend any good books you've read..  #:)

i've been writing a lot lately but i'm too shy to share any of it haha.  here are two poems by bukowski, one of my favorites..

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"there is a loneliness in this world so great
that you can see it in the slow movement of
the hands of a clock.

people so tired
mutilated
either by love or no love.

people just are not good to each other
one on one.

the rich are not good to the rich
the poor are not good to the poor.

we are afraid.

our educational system tells us
that we can all be
big-ass winners.

it hasn't told us
about the gutters
or the suicides.

or the terror of one person
aching in one place
alone

untouched
unspoken to

watering a plant."

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you haven't lived
until you've been in a
flophouse
with nothing but one
light bulb
and 56 men
squeezed together
on cots
with everybody
snoring
at once
and some of those
snores
so
deep and
gross and
unbelievable-
dark
snotty
gross
subhuman
wheezings
from hell
itself.
your mind
almost breaks
under those
death-like
sounds
and the
intermingling
odors:
hard
unwashed socks
pissed and
shitted
underwear
and over it all
slowly circulating
air
much like that
emanating from
uncovered
garbage
cans.
and those
bodies
in the dark
fat and
thin
and
bent
some
legless
armless
some
mindless
and worst of
all:
the total
absence of
hope
it shrouds
them
covers them
totally.
it's not
bearable.
you get
up
go out
walk the
streets
up and
down
sidewalks
past buildings
around the
corner
and back
up
the same
street
thinking
those men
were all
children
once
what has happened
to
them?
and what has
happened
to
me?
it's dark
and cold
out
here.
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« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2011, 11:34:23 AM »

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Positive to the chemical
charges to the negative affect
bursting fire
blooming hate
to the innocent who smell of guilt
speak of guilt
dispense guilt
bursting fire
blooming hate
fuel injected straight to the eyes
that already wince dust
Blood flows thin already
thinner six more toys
six more breaks
tumors pus wounds
the E.R. threw out
six more toys
six more rounds
to hold the intruder at bay
but corpses won't go away
corpses blooming fire
corpses blooming hate
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« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2011, 08:24:53 PM »

^ nice words  :punk:
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« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 02:43:47 AM »

nice dude!

more bukowski
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there is enough treachery, hatred violence absurdity in the average
human being to supply any given army on any given day

and the best at murder are those who preach against it
and the best at hate are those who preach love
and the best at war finally are those who preach peace

those who preach god, need god
those who preach peace do not have peace
those who preach peace do not have love

beware the preachers
beware the knowers
beware those who are always reading books
beware those who either detest poverty
or are proud of it
beware those quick to praise
for they need praise in return
beware those who are quick to censor
they are afraid of what they do not know
beware those who seek constant crowds for
they are nothing alone
beware the average man the average woman
beware their love, their love is average
seeks average

but there is genius in their hatred
there is enough genius in their hatred to kill you
to kill anybody
not wanting solitude
not understanding solitude
they will attempt to destroy anything
that differs from their own
not being able to create art
they will not understand art
they will consider their failure as creators
only as a failure of the world
not being able to love fully
they will believe your love incomplete
and then they will hate you
and their hatred will be perfect

like a shining diamond
like a knife
like a mountain
like a tiger
like hemlock

their finest art
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« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2011, 12:17:05 PM »

Bukowski is one of my favorites as well.

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"There's nothing to mourn about death any more than there is to mourn about the growing of a flower. What is terrible is not death but the lives people live or don't live up until their death. They don't honor their own lives, they piss on their lives. They shit them away. Dumb fuckers. They concentrate too much on fucking, movies, money, family, fucking. Their minds are full of cotton. They swallow God without thinking, they swallow country without thinking. Soon they forget how to think, they let others think for them. Their brains are stuffed with cotton. They look ugly, they talk ugly, they walk ugly. Play them the great music of the centuries and they can't hear it. Most people's deaths are a sham. There's nothing left to die."
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« Reply #5 on: May 27, 2011, 02:31:34 AM »

Just read it to me like a bedtime story.
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« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2011, 06:52:37 PM »

Guided by the Unknown

Rose has a reason to dance in the morning sun.
The lotus has a reason to wait for the first sun rays to spread its petals.
Animals and human beings have a reason to look at the sun in the morning.
From the cradle to the grave we have all reasons unknown in us.
Guided by an unknown principle hidden in us.
We live.
It is always the mystery of the unknown which guides us.
Our ways, our behavior, our tendencies,
The differences we see between people,
The care and concern, the brutality and sufferings,
The thoughts and thought patterns,
The attitudes and guide lines of life,
All is a mystery.
We live in tremendous mystery

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MeKilla the Hun
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« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2011, 02:34:56 PM »

nice angelofthynight  :punk:
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« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2011, 07:32:47 AM »

I have been trying to match my vocablary and soul to beats for a while, and i think im ok. Get alot of dirty looks for being a generic clothes wearing urban expolrer rapper.
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« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2011, 08:20:33 AM »

This is an excerpt UE themed song i made.

Walkin' down these decrepit hallways
ill step it always
i'm feelin' faint from all the peelin' paint and ceilings ain't
stable
yet i am still able
to walk around these fabled places and labeled spaces
they call it
shuttered
but i hear what is uttered
from the creaking doors and leaking floors
shoeprint like blueprints lead me down the darkness
to my stark bliss
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« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2011, 07:00:34 AM »

How bout a haiku!?

Velociraptor,
Is opening the door now,
Terminally fuck'd.
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    « Reply #11 on: February 09, 2020, 10:38:31 PM »

    Guided by the Unknown

    Rose has a reason to dance in the morning sun.
    The lotus has a reason to wait for the first sun rays to spread its petals.
    Animals and human beings have a reason to look at the sun in the morning.
    From the cradle to the grave we have all reasons unknown in us.
    Guided by an unknown principle hidden in us.
    We live.
    It is always the mystery of the unknown which guides us.
    Our ways, our behavior, our tendencies,
    The differences we see between people,
    The care and concern, the brutality and sufferings,
    The thoughts and thought patterns,
    The attitudes and guide lines of life,
    All is a mystery.
    We live in tremendous mystery


    thats nice @AngelOfThyNight
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